doing a paper for vision of angel. Need help on editing my grammar and revised my paper. I don’t know if the setting is clear enough for the readers to understand. The setting is in a park. I still want to keep my title NO PLAGRASIM..
A Sign of Miracle
Wonderful morning and pasty clouds surrounding myself. A rainstorm is brewing. It is like I am seeing the mighty hand of God at the office in the sky. Sitting in a flourishing tree and thinking in the back of my mind how creative our world is. Meanwhile, I watch the large trees dance back again and forth effortlessly with the breeze while wonderful bolts of light hook up the heavens with the earth, illuminating the dark skies. Next, I was very impatient waiting for a magnificent thunderstorm ready to make me feel alive again. I close my eyes and started feeling a chill of the wind in my full body and it felt so great. The sound of the leaves blowing in the streets and the raindrops creates a way that my body, sprit, and mind didn’t have to worry about anything and anyone. As the sky was getting dark and the breeze of the wind breeze over me I started to realize how outstanding everyone is and specially God our creator. Every element of the world is a form of how magical moments can occur when I am ready to give up. In the end of the path there’s always a sign that life there’s pain and happiness but most important another day.