here is the review of the previous work from the teacher, i hope you can help me , still the same formart as before,
Rather than grade this as a retake exam, I am giving you the opportunity to rewrite your essay so that it meets the requirements of the assignment and so you can earn a passing grade.
The thesis statement must state that social media provides a valuable outlet for FREE EXPRESSION and include the three arguments you will use to persuade your reader. Each body paragraph should present one argument. Arguments must be supported with secondary support. The conclusion restates the arguable point and the arguments.
Your essay is informative, not persuasive. Please follow the outline provided before you write your essay. Should you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact the school.
Best wishes as you revise.