Chicano community, writing homework help

I want you to revise a essay, which is 9 pages but i want you to cut down to 5-7 pages.

also I have some comments for you from TA.

in this essay, i wrote globalization as the framing but I want you to change it for some frames like hybrid communities, speech community, habitus.

In this essay, i wrote about Chicano community.

I will provide the lecture ppt, and the audio of my interview.